>>Being with someone else was never going to be an option, even if she travelled to one of the other worlds, because there would always be at least three people in the relationship.<<
This bothers me because of the reason given, that having three people in a relationship somehow makes it impossible. Not what this individual wants, okay; not feasible due to the magic, okay. But it's not impossible just because of the number; plenty of people have poly relationships. That was enough to jar me out of the story, which otherwise was pretty interesting.
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Date: 2012-09-15 01:49 am (UTC)>>Being with someone else was never going to be an option, even if she travelled to one of the other worlds, because there would always be at least three people in the relationship.<<
This bothers me because of the reason given, that having three people in a relationship somehow makes it impossible. Not what this individual wants, okay; not feasible due to the magic, okay. But it's not impossible just because of the number; plenty of people have poly relationships. That was enough to jar me out of the story, which otherwise was pretty interesting.