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Date: 2012-01-24 06:47 am (UTC)
Wow, this is a good tense story!

>>He was three times over the drink drive limit.<<

Is it "drink driving" in the UK? It's "drunk driving" here.

>>“I need to ring a couple of people and then we can help you get this sorted out.”<<

Interesting. I think the Donor House and the cops kind of owe each other a favor. Donor House to the cops, for having the matter dealt with quietly and rationally rather than turning into a huge fracas. The cops, because they didn't have a standard way to handle this but the staff responded calmly and promptly.

I'm thinking that if there's another problem, either side would be happy to call the other again. That's good for everyone.

>>Alice growled. “I'll be there in five minutes.”<<

Somebody's gonna get it tonight! I wonder if Nick will get to watch Alice tearing strips off someone other than himself.
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