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Date: 2011-12-31 04:26 am (UTC)
>>“That he feels free to move on because he sees you as the betrayed<<

I think that should say "betrayer" above.

>>people had known about the town and had moved there is they needed to.<<

That should say "as" above.

>>Only the true priests and priestess even knew it existed.<<

That should say "priestesses" above.
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