>>The most recent picture of Charlotte, from just before the car accident sat next to it, <<
Add a closing comma after "accident" above.
>>As tears welled up in her eyes she wondered if people didn't remember their past lives because it would make it too hard to let go of them and live the new one. <<
Indeed, that's a key reason why. Dealing with other-life memories is challenging and rewarding. Not everyone is suited to it.
I like the character growth that Anna is displaying. It will be good to see this continue.
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Date: 2011-11-22 07:15 am (UTC)That should say "make" above.
>>The most recent picture of Charlotte, from just before the car accident sat next to it, <<
Add a closing comma after "accident" above.
>>As tears welled up in her eyes she wondered if people didn't remember their past lives because it would make it too hard to let go of them and live the new one. <<
Indeed, that's a key reason why. Dealing with other-life memories is challenging and rewarding. Not everyone is suited to it.
I like the character growth that Anna is displaying. It will be good to see this continue.