So as not to re-edit my comment, I am with Stephen King about adjectives and adverbs, especially where they have ambiguous meanings like "thoughtfully". A few carefully chosen shorter words (like 'thinking deeply' or 'with deep though') are easier to read than one larger/longer word with dubious meaning.
I hope I am not overstepping the mark offering my opinions from across the pond and, possibly, an earlier generation!
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Date: 2011-10-07 11:52 pm (UTC)I hope I am not overstepping the mark offering my opinions from across the pond and, possibly, an earlier generation!