>> As far as I know the Motharans picked out names from a book that received to decide which fae was which.” <<

I think that should say "they received" or "that they received" above.

>> “None of the other fae are worshipped, not ever the race creators, <<

I think that should say "not even" above.

>> “The third is one of Riordan’s religion.<<

I think that should say "religions" above.

>> so one of them may well have decided to led a religion on Mothar.” <<

That should say "lead" above.

This whole post is just fascinating.