ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2013-07-09 01:47 am (UTC)

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>>All of them have are blood related to someone who currently lives on Kniroch<<

That should say "All of them are related to someone" or "All of them have a blood relation to someone" above.

>> “Didn’t you say you’d met on the reincarnated fae on Quiar?”<<

That should say "one of the" above.

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