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2013-06-18 03:51 am (UTC)
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>> “Are there other Theasian drinks you could make, because this could become a drink stall.” <<
This is awkward without a question mark. I suggest:
“Are there other Theasian drinks you could make? This could become a drink stall.”
Also, I hadn't thought of counterfeits spreading accidentally through the doors, but yeah, that's a credible threat. 0_o
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This is awkward without a question mark. I suggest:
“Are there other Theasian drinks you could make? This could become a drink stall.”
Also, I hadn't thought of counterfeits spreading accidentally through the doors, but yeah, that's a credible threat. 0_o