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>>they’re the one I’m more likely to recognise<<
That should say "ones" above.
>>He choses to pull families apart<<
That should say "chose" or "chooses" above.
>>since my brother did chose to go to Mothar<<
That should say "choose" above.
I love the complexity in this installment! There are so many issues about different groups and religions and identities, and about groups vs. individuals.
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That should say "ones" above.
>>He choses to pull families apart<<
That should say "chose" or "chooses" above.
>>since my brother did chose to go to Mothar<<
That should say "choose" above.
I love the complexity in this installment! There are so many issues about different groups and religions and identities, and about groups vs. individuals.