ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2013-06-04 04:44 am (UTC)

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>> Instead it made me want to never live another non-magical life, although I did a couple of times more because…” <<

Well, if you can choose to stop when you have a reason to do so, it's not an addiction. That's an interesting demonstration of willpower.

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