ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2013-04-26 12:21 am (UTC)

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>>If she is going to write a book what would you like to see in it, because I’m sure you have as many questions as the Quiarans.<<

I think I'd go first for the kind of cultural information people jot down for travelers -- things likely to come up when you visit a place. Like, 4 is an unlucky number in Japan and sleep cycle is a prevailing influence in Quiar.

>>Anyone have any ideas what I should do next, so I can get the bonus story written and posted.<<

Roll a die. You probably don't have enough readers to compensate for the scatter in this poll.

>>“Never forget how fast my beak is. Your puny mouse arms will never beat them.”<<

That should say "beat it."

*laugh* Funny scene.

It's nice that they're trying to help Lucille integrate as much as she can in Quiar.

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