ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2013-04-04 11:55 pm (UTC)

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>>I can’t chose all of the worlds I love.”<<

That should say "choose" above.

>>“Maybe you should write a book – the Truth About Being A Moonjumper – and publish it here.”<<

Peric is brilliant -- although I'd suggest a pseudonym and a faked publication date for safety's sake.

>>Lucille nibbled on one of her pastries as she remembered exactly how Quiar had felt about that and in the end the world had invaded her dreams for a long conversation about choices and responsibilities.<<

Awesome! I just have to say again, I love your sentient worlds.

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