ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2013-04-03 11:59 pm (UTC)

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>>“Some of them are more difficult that others.”<<

That should say "than others" above.

>>“No.” frane looked around <<

That should say "Frane" above.

This is a cool story. I like seeing these characters interacting.

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