>>about a record book,but that doesn’t mean<<

Add a space after the comma.

>>it might be best to leave Bertram and I here<<

That should say "me and Bertram" above.

>>incur a fee,the level of fee<<

That needs a space after the comma.

>>“I didn’t think anyone would talk about us.” Peric sounded mystified. “We just do what needs to be done.”<<

*laugh* Hero just clocked himself.


This was a great episode. I really enjoyed seeing the growing rapport between Lucille and Peric, how his empathy can be as much curse as gift, and more about the people of Seahorse Port.