ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2013-01-23 11:21 pm (UTC)

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I like this story and these characters for the sense of possibility and how they try to move forward despite obstacles.

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