ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2012-09-20 12:20 am (UTC)

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There's a lot of potential for gender tension here, particularly people of one sex born where the opposite sex has the upper hand. You lose half your potential practitioners that way.

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