I really enjoyed this story! You did a great job of showing how Jack's orientation complicates his life as a vampire, and how challenging it is to explain things to other people, yet he still hasn't given up. And chocolate is unconditional love, yay!
I look forward to Jack finding the right person eventually. There are so many people cycling through the donor house, it should work out. Asexuals are about 1% of the population and the donor house seems to attract the unusual vampires and humans who are willing to give them a chance.
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I really enjoyed this story! You did a great job of showing how Jack's orientation complicates his life as a vampire, and how challenging it is to explain things to other people, yet he still hasn't given up. And chocolate is unconditional love, yay!
I look forward to Jack finding the right person eventually. There are so many people cycling through the donor house, it should work out. Asexuals are about 1% of the population and the donor house seems to attract the unusual vampires and humans who are willing to give them a chance.