ext_3219 (
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2012-07-30 04:09 am (UTC)
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>>it was obvious that they were needed for breeding purposes.<<
Vague antecedent; say "the girls" or something similar in place of "they" above.
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Vague antecedent; say "the girls" or something similar in place of "they" above.