ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2012-02-03 06:47 pm (UTC)

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>>She was an optimist, not stupid.<<

Not parallel; this should be either:

"She was optimistic, not stupid."

OR

"She was an optimist, not an idiot."

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