ext_3219 (
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2011-12-31 04:20 am (UTC)
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>>remembered how she had know about North Square. <<
That should say "known" above.
>>as though all the races failed to fulfil their expectations when they arrive here. <<
Those should say "fulfill" and "arrived" above.
>>but I still feel, even after fifteen years, life I would be betraying your father.<<
That should say "like" above.
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That should say "known" above.
>>as though all the races failed to fulfil their expectations when they arrive here. <<
Those should say "fulfill" and "arrived" above.
>>but I still feel, even after fifteen years, life I would be betraying your father.<<
That should say "like" above.