ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2011-10-25 02:32 am (UTC)

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>>Maybe then I try again.”<<

That should say "I can try" above.

>>it was because one of my closest friends were psycho<<

I think that should say "went psycho" above; "were" doesn't match the tense.

>>I did it any way<<

That should say "anyway" above.


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