This story is so bittersweet. It's a good part of Richard's story to capture.
>>the sword of Death out of it's sheath<<
That should say "its" above.
>>With a thought he summoned the book of Death, which appeared on his lap, and a quill.<<
Okay, how did he learn to write with a quill? If it's anything like a normal quill, that's a different skill than writing with a ballpoint pen. I think it would be amusing to see him trying to figure that out the first time.
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>>the sword of Death out of it's sheath<<
That should say "its" above.
>>With a thought he summoned the book of Death, which appeared on his lap, and a quill.<<
Okay, how did he learn to write with a quill? If it's anything like a normal quill, that's a different skill than writing with a ballpoint pen. I think it would be amusing to see him trying to figure that out the first time.