ext_3219 ([identity profile] ysabetwordsmith.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2011-10-08 07:04 am (UTC)

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>>A lot of them had been chased out of their homes because they'd turned into animals and the parents had no idea that it was actually their own children they'd chased out. <<

That is so sad.

I didn't spot any more typos in this story.

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