ext_50412 ([identity profile] natalief.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2011-10-07 11:52 pm (UTC)

So as not to re-edit my comment, I am with Stephen King about adjectives and adverbs, especially where they have ambiguous meanings like "thoughtfully". A few carefully chosen shorter words (like 'thinking deeply' or 'with deep though') are easier to read than one larger/longer word with dubious meaning.

I hope I am not overstepping the mark offering my opinions from across the pond and, possibly, an earlier generation!

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