It's interesting to see Persephone interacting with a young girl.

>> “I'm sorry Persephone.” <<

That needs a comma after "sorry" above.

>>Your friends want you to be just like them, the priestesses feel like you're their daughter and the last thing you want to do is let down your family.<<

Comma splice; change the comma to a semi-colon or break into two sentences.

>>“Goodbye Aisling.”
“Goodbye Persephone.<<

Both of those need a comma after "Goodbye."

Not many typos in this story!