ext_50412 ([identity profile] natalief.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] k_a_webb 2011-10-07 03:46 pm (UTC)

I like this. Also, typo / grammar:

If she'd hadn't of made the choice

Should be "she hadn't've" or "she hadn't have" in pure English but I guess there may be a regional/USAmerican variation at play here.

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